Sunday, May 27, 2007

Whitney F.

Whitney F.
Fortunately
Poem

Fortunately I got a new bike
Unfortunately when I got it broke because the man sat on it and it broke
Fortunately I went to the bike store and got it fixed
Unfortunately they could not fix it because they go confused
Fortunately I was very mad
Unfortunately I did not try to break it
Fortunately after that I went to the beach and had fun.
Unfortunately the wave hit me and knocked me out.
Fortunately the lifeguard was very lazy so I ran so he could not find me.
Unfortunately he walked right passed me and slipped on an ice cube that had pee from a dog on it.
Fortunately I laughed so hard he heard me and caught me.
Unfortunately he took me to the lifeguard chair.
Fortunately my mom found me and me call the police and he got arrested.
Unfortunately we left the beach.
Fortunately we went to the pool.
Unfortunately the pool was closed because some one had gotten heart in the pool.
Fortunately I did not go in.
Unfortunately we went home.
Fortunately it was my birthday but I thought my parents did not know.
Unfortunately I did not have a new bike so I could not ride with my friends.
Fortunately I could ride my razor.
Unfortunately it was broken so I couldn’t ride it.
Fortunately it was the end of the day and the bike department got a new worker.
Unfortunately he did not know how to fix a bike.
Fortunately we went the next day.
Unfortunately he left when we got there.
Fortunately he fixed my bike.
Unfortunately the wheel was flat.
Fortunately it was the end of the day.

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

did she ever get the tire fixed? it was fun to read all the series of events.


Samuel b

Anonymous said...

SOOOO COOL I LOED IT I HAVE A BIKE TOO.




FROM,
LILLY

Anonymous said...

OOPS I SPELLED LOVE WRONG

FROM,
LILLY

Anonymous said...

I loved loved loved yours Love your friend Madison

Anonymous said...

I loved yours love Madison

Anonymous said...

I loved your poem. But you spelled hurt rong you spelled it as heart. Anyway it was an awesome poem.

Gaby O.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Hey Whit loved your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.
Your spelled heart instead of hurt.

Love,
taylor E.

Anonymous said...

Great Poem!! I liked all of the details. That bike broke a lot. It was really really good.


Grace

Anonymous said...

Whitney I loved your poem! It was great!

Your friend,
Katy

Anonymous said...

Whitney I loved your poem! It was great!

Your friend,
Katy

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Anonymous said...

Hay whit you spelled hurt wrong it was heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make sure you spell check next time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jewels

Anonymous said...

I loved it when that guy slipped on an ice cube that had dog pee on it.






from Cole F.

Anonymous said...

love love your poem





from Lileana Cyr

Anonymous said...

I LOVED YOURS LOVDE MADISON

Anonymous said...

Sorry i spelt loved rog i also love love love your story.It was asome