Gaby O
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I was going to Dallas, Texas to see my family
Unfortunately there was thunder and rain, and it was as cold as a night on Pluto, so we could not go to Dallas, Texas
Fortunately we had toys like white boards, dolls, books, ipods, and other things in our backpacks
Unfortunately we could not go back to our nice, warm home
Fortunately we had some comfortable clothes that we needed for Texas
Unfortunately our clothes were on a plane that was as big as a dinosaur
Fortunately we could get our comfortable clothes out of the plane
Unfortunately only my clothes were found
Fortunately my brother, sister, and mom could fit into my really clean, comfortable clothes
Unfortunately my dad had to stay in his dirty, uncomfortable clothes
Fortunately my dad’s clean, nice clothes were found on the floor of LAX airport
Unfortunately they had gotten all wet in the raining water, pigs, and goats
Fortunately the ones in the middle were dry and clean
Unfortunately my mom forgot to clean them, so they were as dirty as mud
Fortunately the rain stopped so we got to go home
17 comments:
I liked all the details and were you were going. It was a really good poem
:-) Annalise
Gaby that was a fabulous poem that you wrote! I really liked it.
P.S. Again I really liked it!
Carly Z.
I that it was really cool
Kenzie .S
Really Nice!!
Alina
Awesome poem! That was great.
great poem! I liked how you discribed the clothes.
i liked the details in the story From Whitney .F
i liked the details in the story From Whitney .F
Gaby I loved yours keep up the good work Love Madison
Gaby I loved yours Keep up the good work Love Madison
I really liked the end, it was really great.
keap it real,
Shane
HAY GIRL! GABBY GOO
YOUR DANCE FRIEND
It was really nice, just like you
Shane
It was really nice, just like you
Shane
I can't believe Shane said that too you!!!
courtney :-)
I wrote a song about you on my guitar. It was going to be a suprise but I think your really nice. I haven't told anyone yet so it's a secret.
I think you know who I am.
Love,
Shane
Hey I didn't right that!!!
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