Emily D.
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I get to go to Disneyland the Happiest Place on Earth
Unfortunately I had to go to the scary painful doctors first
Fortunately I got a big round Lollypop
Unfortunately it was yucky grape flavored, I don’t like grape
Fortunately I also got a big shiny sticker
Unfortunately they only had small ugly TMNT (teenage mutant ninja turtles)
Fortunately I got to leave as fast as I could
Unfortunately there was so much traffic that I couldn’t even see my house and I was still on my street
Fortunately when I got there I was able to ride Screamin’ California witch was my favorite
Unfortunately every other awesome and giant ride was closed
Fortunately I went to the best candy store in town after I was done
Unfortunately I only got one little gross candy
Fortunately after I got a baby puppy
Unfortunately my big brother got to name it
Fortunately it was a nice Pug
Unfortunately my brother named her Excalibur
Fortunately it was a girl
Unfortunately it wasn’t potty trained
Fortunately it liked me
Unfortunately it peed in my house, it smelt as bad as a diaper
Fortunately it peed in Ryan’s room
Unfortunately my room is right next to Ryan’s room
Fortunately the story is over so I don’t have to say anything else
5 comments:
Emily my favorite ride at disneyland is also the Califonia Scrmen.
p.s.
your fortunetly poem was great
Addie w.
your poem was awesome! I really liked it when you talked about the pug and how your brother got to name it.
:-)Annallise
I loved your poem!! It's great. It is the best!!
Grace
Dear Moe me,
I love your poem and how you wrote about a pug and I love ow you you went to Disney Land!!!!!!
Love,
Kiki!!!!!
i loved all the details
from Lilly
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