Carly Z.
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I was going to go to Maui
Unfortunately the flight got delayed
Fortunately I went to Disneyland
Unfortunately the rides were closed
Fortunately I went to my friend’s house
Unfortunately there was nothing to do
Fortunately the next day was the first day of summer
Unfortunately it was really cold and windy during summer
Fortunately I went to Sea World with my Brownie troop
Unfortunately we only got to stay for one night
Fortunately I had a big breakfast the next day
Unfortunately I got a huge stomach ach
Fortunately I had a great teacher the next year
5 comments:
Dear, Carly
You are a very creative write. And a great spelling.
From,
Nicole
Hi Carly,
your story was great I liked every thing. Keep up the good work.
you had a good breakfast are you ok
Max.D
I liked that you had a good teacher (learning comes first) : )
Grant.R
DEAR YOUR POEM ROCKS
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