Emily T.
My Unfortunately Day
Fortunately I got an invitation to go to fun sleepover at my friend’s house
Unfortunately on the way there it started to rain as hard as rocks
Fortunately I had cozy blanket
Unfortunately the cozy blanket blew away
Fortunately it stopped raining and the warm sun came out
Unfortunately I fell into a deep soggy hole
Fortunately I found a bright opening and climbed out
Unfortunately where I got out there were scary jaguars
Fortunately they were peacefully sleeping
Unfortunately I dropped in a hole as big as a crocodile
Fortunately I came up the same soggy hole
Unfortunately my friend’s door was closed as hard as blocks
Fortunately my friend’s mom saw me and I got to go to my friend’s sleepover
5 comments:
YOUR POEM WAS WONDERFUL!!!!!!
From:
JT
loved it!!!
Nick
GO ME!!!!!!!!!!I DID A WONDERFUL JOB ON MY POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From,
myself!ME!
Thanks alot Em! I really like it how you wrote really nice things to me! Right back at you. you have got a lot of talewntn yourself! thank you for being a great friend!!!
Your friend,
Courtney :-)
Dear Emily,
I loved your poem! It was great! You put a lot of juicy
details into it. Thank you for the nice comment.
Love,
Heidi
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