Thursday, May 31, 2007

Adelaide W.

Adelaide W.

Fortunately Poem


Fortunately I was going to get a small Chihuahua
Unfortunately the dog store was closed
Fortunately my friend had a puppy party that day
Unfortunately the party was canceled
Fortunately I got to watch a Chihuahua
Unfortunately I came late and the owner fired me
Fortunately my mom went to a dinner dance and got me a Chihuahua I was so happy.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked it because it ws abut dogs.

Anonymous said...

I really liked it! You should write more poems!

Anonymous said...

great job addie i'm sorry that that happened








James T.

Anonymous said...

ADDIE YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB I THOUGHT IT WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER SEEN!

Carly Z.

Anonymous said...

ADDIE YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB I THOUGHT IT WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER SEEN!

Carly Z.

Anonymous said...

Hey Addie I'm glad that the ending was happy. You finally got what you wanted!The little dog.






Your friend Kate #10

Anonymous said...

you must liked your dog



Max.D

Anonymous said...

What an adorable poem!

Anonymous said...

What an adorable poem!