Taylor E.
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I was going Ice-skating with my friend and her little, weird, crazy, sister
Unfortunately I couldn’t go because I had to go to my brothers’ baseball game, witch I didn’t want to go to
Fortunately there was my favorite pizza at the baseball game
Unfortunately I didn’t like it because I didn’t see the peppers
Fortunately I didn’t have to eat the gross, discussing pizza
Unfortunately I got very hungry the ride home
Fortunately the game was almost over & we were about to go home
Unfortunately there was a huge rainstorm
Fortunately the storm flew by quick
Unfortunately there was a traffic jam
Fortunately I got home to eat my favorite meal, it was soup
Unfortunately my mom didn’t cook the soup all the way
Fortunately I ended up going Ice-skating with my friend and her sister & I got to go Ice-skating with my friends.
9 comments:
Great Poem Taylor!! It was awesome!! It's the best!!
Grace
talor it was an awsome story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! iit was the best from whitney .f
sory if i spelled the word it rong
from whitney
I loved your poem!! It was the best everD!! It was awesome!!
Gaby
Dear T,
YOU ROCK!!!! You did terriffic JUICEY sentences!! You mst have put alot of work into it!!!!
From,
Lawnmower Lucy
P.S. Thanks for BLOGGING ME!!!!!
HAY T WHATS CRACKING?
Loved your poem!
Lisa
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i liked your poem
your friend
marianne
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