Sunday, May 27, 2007

Kevin M.

Kevin M.
Fortunately Poem

Fortunately it’s my ninth birthday
Unfortunately it was raining
Fortunately it was inside
Unfortunately there was no cake
Fortunately there was ice cream
Unfortunately it all melted
Fortunately we had a pool party
Unfortunately the pool was cold
Fortunately we heated it up
Unfortunately it was dirty
Fortunately we had a cleaner
Unfortunately my party was over
Fortunately I had a lot of presents
Unfortunately my brother stole it all
Fortunately I called my parents
Unfortunately I got blamed
Fortunately my brother lost Gamecube
Unfortunately my story is over

36 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice poem i liked it from Bennt B

Anonymous said...

it was a great story


sutton B.

Anonymous said...

Nice story kevin! It was hilarious! I hope you get your presents back!

From,
sam

Anonymous said...

I realy liked your poem

Mason A.

Anonymous said...

this was good

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Anonymous said...

your poem is asom

Anonymous said...

nice poem

Anonymous said...

yes.nice poem

Anonymous said...

nice

Anonymous said...

nice poem KEVIN

Anonymous said...

hhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiii can you play

Anonymous said...

hi kevin you rock

Anonymous said...

what is up kev

Anonymous said...

kevin your poem is awesome thank you for the comment to
Nick

Anonymous said...

great poem kevin

Anonymous said...

nice poem kevin

Anonymous said...

good poem

Anonymous said...

to bad your cake melted

Anonymous said...

great poem

Anonymous said...

i loved your poem

Anonymous said...

that was a funny story

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Great poem Kevin

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

I liked your poem KEVIN




Evan C