Sam W.
Fortunately
Fortunately it was my exciting birthday
Unfortunately it was in the tall trees in Hawaii
Fortunately I got a speed boat
Unfortunately it sunk to the bottom of the ocean as I was sleeping
Fortunately it had a scuba diving suit and air tank
Unfortunately the air tank ran out really fast
Fortunately I rode on a dolphin that knew where I was going
Unfortunately I didn’t know where to go to next
Fortunately I found the tall trees!!!!!!
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great poem.
to,sam
your fourtunately poem was great. You ROCK
from,Alex L
p.s.great poem
Me rocks
I like hawaii and good poem
Max.D
your poem was the bestin the world
From Alex L
your poem is the best in the class.
great poem
from,Alexl
ur poem Rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JT p.s. sorry if i put too many exclamation marks!
i loved your poem sam its kevin i also like hawii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:):):):):):)kevinl
your poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alex l
you rock at making poems
alexl
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from, Alex L ps sorry if I put to much hi's i'm gonna do more
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