Avery P.
Fortunately and Unfortunately
Fortunately I got 1,000,000,000,000 shiny dollars
Unfortunately it was only for really horrible emergencies
Fortunately I pretended I had a bad emergency
Unfortunately my parents found out and they were mad
Fortunately I didn’t get punished
Unfortunately I had to go walk my amazing dog
Fortunately I saw a really cute puppy
Unfortunately he was a vicious` bulldog
Fortunately I ran as fast as a speeding racecar
Unfortunately I got totally tired
Fortunately I went to my tremendous house to rest
Unfortunately my kind family wasn’t there
Fortunately I went to my most favorite place in the world
Unfortunately it was dark and nobody was there
Fortunately it was a surprise party for the money I got
10 comments:
GREAT POEM!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!! VERY CREATIVE!!!!
ERIN H.
Nice Avery!! I wish I got money also.........
Your Friend,
Alina M
I WANT DA MONEY!!!!!!!!
From:
JT P.S. GIVE ME THE MONEY
Great Poem!!!!! I thought it was very creative. And I want all of the money. I also liked all of the adjectives.
Your Friend,
Grace A.
Avery I thought the first line was pretty funny!
Your friend,
Katy
You did a good job a what do you do with that money?
Max.D
loved the poem!Great adjectives.I think you could buy Black Eyed Peas tickets with that money.Fergie sings there to.
Erin D.
please can I have the money!
JT p.s. I rock!
Your poem was the woooooooooooorst!
Austin
Avery,
I LOVED YOUR POEM!
Your friend,
Heidi
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