Sunday, May 27, 2007

Tenton S.

Trenton S
Fortunately Poem

Fortunately today is my birth day and I got a lot of presents
Unfortunately today is the first day of school and I have to do a lot of work
Fortunately I got to leave early from school to go on a trip to another country
Unfortunately it was raining cats and dogs so the flight was canceled
Fortunately it stopped in just a few minutes
Unfortunately it took fourteen hours to get to England
Fortunately it was a non-stop flight so we got there really quick
Unfortunately it was raining when we got there and the puddles were almost a foot deep
Fortunately we had a great big umbrella as big as the world
Unfortunately it had holes in it and we all got super, super wet
Fortunately the door to the airport was right in front of us
Unfortunately it was closed
Fortunately there was a shuttle right next to us
Unfortunately it didn’t have a top so we all got really wet
Fortunately it could go super fast and we got there in no time
Unfortunately it started raining a lot harder
Fortunately we rented a really cool car that could go as fast a Lamborghini
Unfortunately we didn’t have a place to stay
Fortunately we rented a hotel in the really big city
Unfortunately the power was out in our room and couldn’t
Fortunately the lights turned on and all of our friends and family were there

22 comments:

Anonymous said...

That was a great poem. I think you shold write more.It was really good.



Sutton B.

Anonymous said...

great poem trenton

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Anonymous said...

good poem trenton

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super poem trenton

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sweet poem

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your poem was good

Anonymous said...

I liked your poem trenton

Anonymous said...

it was a little short

Anonymous said...

hi trenton

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howdy your poem was great

Anonymous said...

good poem TRENTON.Iliked it.



EVAN C

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Anonymous said...

great poem trenton. i loved it

Anonymous said...

hello trenton

Anonymous said...

nice story trenton it was really funny how did you come up with it

Anonymous said...

Trenton,
I loved your poem.
Great job!!!!!

Anonymous said...

trenton your poem was great

Anonymous said...

great poem

Anonymous said...

You are very creative and a great storyteller. Hopefully you will write more.