Joe A
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I got an awesome and fast new electric motorcycle
Unfortunately I crash it into a tree and it broke
Fortunately I got it fixed at a store
Unfortunately it exploded with a big boom
Fortunately I was on a soft patch of grass
Unfortunately I hit my head on a hard patch of grass
Fortunately I was OK
Unfortunately I broke my left leg
Fortunately there was a hospital nearby
Unfortunately it was for 18 and up
Fortunately there was a kid hospital next to it
Unfortunately it was full with people
Fortunately my dad was a doctor
Unfortunately he was at his hospital working
Fortunately my mom was a doctor
Unfortunately she was at the market
Fortunately she would be home in two minutes
Unfortunately she was not a person who does surgery
Fortunately she has a medical book nearby
Unfortunately it was written in Chinese
Fortunately she brought a friend over who was Chinese
Unfortunately she mistook it for Japanese
Fortunately we found an open hospital
Unfortunately it was an 18 and over hospital
Fortunately we finally found a hospital and I got surgery on my leg
15 comments:
ok was not juming up and down your buddies
I cant believe what a hard life that was.I hope you feel better.
i liked the really fast motorcycle and i wouldn't of crashed it into the tree so that you could ride it way longer!
Dont mind the crash Ive had a big scrach as big as this.
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i liked how you described a lot i liked it ;0) and it was long.
Trent A
Joe i really liked how much details that you put
hey your poem is great i liked when he crshed into the tree!
from Benny B
BONJOUR!J'ai adorait ton poem! AUREVOIR,
Sixtine de Montmarin
France,Paris
You are on clever and funny guy!
I think you have a future here!
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Great poem. I liked the part when you crashed into the tree on the motorcycle.I never new your mom and dad were docters.I also liked the part when the Chinese lady came over.When did you get a electric motorcycle.how is your head.Did you get a bump on your head.Can you play today.Your poem is long.your poem is asom.You rock! ! Q ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ? < < < < < < < < < > > > > > > > > { { { { { { { { { + + + + + + + + = = = = = = = = = = = = = = \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ ..........
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CONNOR DEVERIAN
joe your poem was awesome and thankyou for the comment to bad you crashed on a motorcycle =(
nick
hey joe your poem was great i feel bad about the motorcycle crash
I loved the time when your motorcylcle blew up
From David
joe i liked your story madison B
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