Madison B
Fortunately Poem
Fortu
Madison B
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately I went to a great birthday party
Unfortunately I was the only girl there and I was the only one in a skirt
Fortunately they had very good cake
Unfortunately they did not have enough great cake for me
Fortunately I got ice cram it was better then cake
Unfortunately the ice cream was bad as dirt
Fortunately I got a Popsicle it was gross as eating a pig
Unfortunately I got a very very good chocolate muffin
Unfortunately I am Learjet to chocolate
Fortunately I was the first to go on the jumper
Unfortunately all of the boys were actually grills
Fortunately it was actually my party
nately I went to a great birthday party
Unfortunately I was the only girl there and I was the only one in a skirt
Fortunately they had very good cake
Unfortunately they did not have enough great cake for me
Fortunately I got ice cram it was better then cake
Unfortunately the ice cream was bad as dirt
Fortunately I got a Popsicle it was gross as eating a pig
Unfortunately I got a very very good chocolate muffin
Unfortunately I am Learjet to chocolate
Fortunately I was the first to go on the jumper
Unfortunately all of the boys were actually grills
Fortunately it was actually my party
10 comments:
I thought it was great! You must of put a lot of time into it.
From Kate your best friend
Madison I loved your story and you miss spelled cream.I'm so happy you got invited to a party!That was a great story.
Your friend,
Val
madison tu historia es fantastica y divertida espero que te hayas divertido mucho y haya sido una bonita experiencia
....................with love Rosa
madison i liked your story and the details
Madison I thought your story was great and I am sorry I corrected you.I MEAN YOUR STORY WAS ROCKEN COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your friend
Val H.
i like your story it was cool but you wrote fourtunely
like this fou at the begining
MADISON I LOVED IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
MADISON YOUR STROY WAS AWSOME
madison,
The party was a great event. The story was one of the best I have ever read!!!! Keep up the good writing.
Your number one fan,
RSB
i loved your story
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