Nick B.
Unfortunately and Fortunately poem
Fortunately it was my birthday
Unfortunately it was raining like rocks falling from the sky at the party
Fortunately my mom took us to Boomers
Unfortunately the car broke down
Fortunately there was a taxi
Unfortunately Boomers was closed
Fortunately my dad took us airsofting
Unfortunately I was hit 45 times
Fortunately we went home
Unfortunately it was still raining
Fortunately it was still my birthday!!!
14 comments:
I was funny and I liked it
Trent A
owww that must of hurt when you got hit 45 times with the airsoft gun!
from a scale 1 to 10 it would be an 8.I liked your story I liked the way you discribed the rain as "rocks falling from the sky" great discription!
Samuel b
hey nick it is your friend
ben i would give you a 10 if a scale 1 out of 10 your poem rocks
you rock and so does your poem!
from Ben b
hey nick i am going to die that was so funny hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
from your friend Ben B
P.S
you rock
NICK UR POEM ROCKS!!!!!!
From:
JT
your peom was one of the best peoms
by kevin
Nick I liked your poem. I feel bad that you got hit 45 times.
Joe A
nice poem
from,connor
Great job nick to bad you got hit 45 times
I like the middle
Great good!I feel sorry for you because you got hit 45 times.Nice poem!!!!
From,
Emily T.
Nick, GREAT POEM! I feel really really bad that you got hit 45 times.
Your friend,
Heidi
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