Sunday, May 27, 2007

Sutton B.

Sutton B.
Fortunately poem
Fortunately it was summer and it was sunny
Unfortunately I was grounded and I had nothing to do
Fortunately I was only grounded for a day
Unfortunately I got sick
Fortunately I felt better
Unfortunately my mom made me eat spinach and I didn’t like it
Fortunately the next day was my birthday
Unfortunately my cake tasted like green beans
Fortunately I got a hamster and I named it Dodo
Unfortunately it bit me
Fortunately went to Hawaii
Unfortunately I didn’t sit next to my Mom
Fortunately when I got to Hawaii it was as beautiful as the ocean
Unfortunately I got lost and I was scared
Fortunately I found my hotel room
Unfortunately when I got back to the room everyone was gone
Fortunately they were just outside
Unfortunately the next day I had to go home
Fortunately I had 3 months left of summer

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear Sutton,
You did realy good. I liked the part about when you got to go to Hawaii.



from,
max.D

Anonymous said...

Dear Sutton,
I really liked your poem.I liked the part when it was your birthday.


From,
Ethan

Anonymous said...

Dear sutten
I liked your poem



Your friend
Joey

Anonymous said...

nice poem
from connor

Anonymous said...

hay sutton

your ney door neighbor!