Courtney J.
Fortunately
Fortunately it was the first day of summer
Unfortunately it was pouring as hard as hard cement
Fortunately the rain stopped and it was bright and sunny
Unfortunately everything was supper soggy
Fortunately everything dried up super fast
Unfortunately our car was as wet as a thunderstorm so we could
not go anywhere
Fortunately we exercised and walked down to the sandy beach
Unfortunately the beach was cramped
Fortunately we walked down to Balboa Island and shopped until
We dropped
Unfortunately it started to rain again so we had to walk home
Fortunately we got a ride home
Unfortunately the car broke down
Fortunately the rain dried up so we walked home
Unfortunately we it took us an hour to walk home
Fortunately when we got home we wanted hot cocoa
Unfortunately we were all out of hot cocoa
Fortunately there was a market near by so we went and bought hot cocoa
Unfortunately they were al out of hot cocoa
Fortunately the rain cleared up so we went out to play
Unfortunately we felt like finishing our game inside
Fortunately summer came again and we had so much fun!
16 comments:
LOVED YOUR POEM COURTS!!!!!!!! IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST BUD ERWIN!!!
Loved your poem Court Court. It was the BEST EVE!!!!
Your Friend Payton
I loved the hot cocoa part.
bff,
austin
did you see what austin said!
from Ben B
P.S
i cant belive he said that
Nice Court! I liked the first sentence..................
Your Friend,
Alina
Great job Courtney! It was awesome. It was the best!!!!
Grace
Courtney I thought it was one of the best yet
Awsome,
Katy
Courtney I thought it was one of the best yet
Awsome,
Katy
That was A reaely long story
your Freind caleb Rodolph
That was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your Freind caleb
that was great
caleb
your poem was GREAT courtney and your HOT
Austin
That was poop!
Love,Caleb
AWSOME DUDE!!!!!!!KEEP UP THE COOL WORK DUDE!!!!!YOU ARE A WONDERFUL FRIEND AND TALENT TO HAVE IN OUR CLASSROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your Friend,
Emily T.
LOVED YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Courtney J.I love you will you be my girlfriend. please say yes. p.s your realy hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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