Caroline B.
Fortunately and Unfortunately Poem
Fortunately I was going to Disneyland
Unfortunately my favorite ride, Splash Mountain, was closed
Fortunately I had my favorite ice cream that was as soft as a pillow
Unfortunately it all spilled on me
Fortunately my favorite ride opened
Unfortunately the line was way too long
Fortunately I got a souvenir
Unfortunately we had to go home
Fortunately I had a great time at Disneyland!
13 comments:
I LUVED YOUR POEM CAROLINE!!!!IT WUS SO CREATIVE!!!!!!!! I CUD RED IT 100,000,000 TIMES!!!!!!!!! ERIN HATCH :-)
Was it really fun, there wasnt really anything good in the story.
Grant.R
I loved your detail, but best of all I loved the way you discribed the ice-cream. I felt like it really was melting in my mouth!
From, Kate H.
I like when you said the ice cream was soft as a pillow it could make me picture it.
Grant. R
I loved your poem Caroline! Did you have a good time??? It seems like you did.
Your friend, Payton
Nice Going Caroline...............with the funny poem
Love, Alina
nice poem caroline!
From:
JT
That was a great poem!!!!! I wish I got to go to disneyland. I also liked all of the details.
Your Friend,
Grace
No fair!! I wanna go to disneyland!!
JT
June 8,2007
Hey Caroline, I thoght the exact oppiset of Grant.R. It was very Creative and I Think every thing in the story is good.
Your Friend,
Lisa
That wuz the best ever caroline!
best bud,
Courts:-)
GOOD POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From,
Emily T.
I loved your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love,
Heidi
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