Lucy D.
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately it was the first day of school, but I was still at my house.
Unfortunately I spilt hot chocolate.
Fortunately no one laughed.
Unfortunately I tripped on the black top.
Fortunately I didn’t break a knee.
Unfortunately I backed into a pole.
Fortunately it was a pillow.
Unfortunately there was medal in side the pillow that hurts for everyone
Fortunately we went home so I can rest
Unfortunately my sister pulled my hair so it hurt even more
Unfortunately my dinner fell on me.
Fortunately I had ice cream.
Unfortunately I tripped and my face fell in ice cream
Fortunately I got to have more ice cream that had cookie dough with chocolate chips
Unfortunately we watched a Veggie Tales
Fortunately The Veggie Tale movie was only 30 min. and after I got to on the computer and played Kid Pix
Unfortunately the computer broke and we had to watch 15 more Veggie Tale movie the movies were horrible
Fortunately will have a better day tomorrow!
11 comments:
I liked it because of the pillowpole it was funny.
it was great because it had a begining and an ending.
from Gabrielle
I loved your poem it was great!!! I was glad that no one laughed at you when you spilled the hot chocolatte, because that would have been imberising for you. I also liked it that you posted a comment for my sister Val. She really appresheated it.
Your friend Kate #10
Hi Lucy!Thank you for posting me a coment.You did a great gob that must have been the worst day of your life.You put two unforunleties together.
Your friend,
valerie
I really liked the poem - it is great! I especially like that you know that everything gets better. I liked that you know that even though some bad things happened you knew that something good would also happen.
Hi Lucy
Your poem was great I like how U used the juciy sentences
Love
Taylor E.
I LOVED IT LOVED IT A LOT
LILLY
dear Lucy,
after that day you must have a lot of bruises.Hope you don't have another day like this.Also you had very good adjectives
your friend
annalise
Lucy you axedently pt two unfortentlys in a row. : )
this poem rocked i almost have had days like this.
Not to be offensive, but I didn't really enjoy this poem at all.
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