Kevin M.
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately it’s my ninth birthday
Unfortunately it was raining
Fortunately it was inside
Unfortunately there was no cake
Fortunately there was ice cream
Unfortunately it all melted
Fortunately we had a pool party
Unfortunately the pool was cold
Fortunately we heated it up
Unfortunately it was dirty
Fortunately we had a cleaner
Unfortunately my party was over
Fortunately I had a lot of presents
Unfortunately my brother stole it all
Fortunately I called my parents
Unfortunately I got blamed
Fortunately my brother lost Gamecube
Unfortunately my story is over
Sunday, May 27, 2007
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36 comments:
nice poem i liked it from Bennt B
it was a great story
sutton B.
Nice story kevin! It was hilarious! I hope you get your presents back!
From,
sam
I realy liked your poem
Mason A.
this was good
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nice poem KEVIN
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kevin your poem is awesome thank you for the comment to
Nick
great poem kevin
nice poem kevin
good poem
to bad your cake melted
great poem
i loved your poem
that was a funny story
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I liked your poem KEVIN
Evan C
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