Evan C
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately today is my ninth birthday party
Unfortunately it got canceled
Fortunately I had it the next day
Unfortunately my friends had other stuff to do so they couldn’t come
Fortunately I had my party with my wonderful family
Unfortunately I didn’t get an Xbox
Fortunately I got other really cool presents
Unfortunately they broke in 20 minutes
Fortunately I got new presents that didn’t break
Unfortunately I didn’t have a lot of time to play with them
Fortunately I had fun playing with them while I could
Unfortunately it was bedtime
Fortunately I like going to bed
21 comments:
i liked it it was funny because your toys broke in 20 min! :) :(
I feel sorry for you and your toys but good thigs come in life
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thats to bad that they broke in 20 min. ;0(((((((((((
hey kevin it was funny how the toys broke in 20 minutes
from Benny B
can you play today evan?
kevin
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i liked how your toys broke in 20 minutes
good poem
great poem evan
i loved your poem
super poem evan
I really liked your poem evan
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your poem was great evan
good poem
I liked it
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good poem evan
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I really like your poem Evan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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