Ethan W
Fortunately Poem
Fortunately it’s a cold Christmas Eve
Unfortunately I forgot to get my brother a Christmas present.
Fortunately my mom took me to the store to buy him a big Christmas present.
Unfortunately I didn’t know what to get him.
Fortunately my mom reminded me he likes trains big colorful trains.
Unfortunately the train Santa Fe train set that I wanted to by him was to expensive.
Fortunately my mom gave me some more money to pay for it.
Unfortunately they didn’t have any train wrapping paper.
Fortunately my mom had some at home.
Unfortunately it was as cold as a night on Mars outside.
Fortunately I had brought a jacket.
Unfortunately it had a hole in it.
Fortunately the car wasn’t far away.
Unfortunately it was snowing very heavily.
Fortunately it ended soon.
Unfortunately our car broke down.
Fortunately a tow truck picked us up.
Unfortunately the freeway was closed.
Fortunately we went a longer way but we still got home.
Unfortunately my mom was wrong she didn’t have any train wrapping paper.
Fortunately I had time to make some.
Unfortunately it ripped.
Fortunately I could tape it and nothing bad happened anymore.
7 comments:
that was great ethan.But net time try to remember to buy a present for your brother
Noah G.
i liked it alot and i think you should do lots more.
koen e.
great story or actullay a........poem.
That poem was cool except maybe next time buy your brother a Christmas present that's BIG.
P.S.
Buy the present with your own money.
Kian
That was a great story.
Sutton B.
I realy loved your poem
Mason A.
Mason said that my mom cut the book in haft
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